Advice In the Midnight

It was an old lady’s voice
That woke me up from my common dreams

It was an old man’s voice
That walk me past my future

It was an old lady’s voice
That told me not to love late in the evening

It was an old man’s voice
That told me of manhood inborn brilliance

It was an old lady’s voice
That sang, strength, hope, courage all night

It was an old man’s voice
That directed me to seek light in a dark world

It was an old lady’s advice
That taught me how to make a lifetime choice

It was a man’s voice
That taught me cherish my lifetime choice

Of all the voices I heard
Of all the vices and virtues, I had

It was a woman’s voice that built this fortress of a man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Hello John Kazadi, a person taught by two people. A lot of lessons learned. A well created poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.
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April 30, 2020 at 12:14 AM
Hello Darlen DE Beaulie I am very impressed reading your comment on poem. thanks for always encouraging me. have a good day my friend
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