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Old men, Old schools

Young men, new rules

Self-taught ideaology all out, times bout' to expire. . .

I'm incline to believe in the righteous ways I think I take the advice and wisdom of the  ELDER MAN!!!

                                                                                                      jelser

Advice and Wisdom of Old Elder Man

Old man, old school
Young man, new rules
Self-taught all out, times bout to expire
Now the youth today look lup to themselves riding the streets with flat tires
They think they have the way
To make it on their no plans, yet they stand
Young man can't stand
The advice and wisdom of the elder man
Young man thinks he can
To do it all out the palm of his hands
Old man reminded of the plans
His children have had now they have their heads in their hands
Watching them, Washington, all the politicians
Four leaf Glover, Sesame Street and Grover
And inclined  to the beings of time
Better take the advice and wisdom of the elder man
No time to sway, sag, brag or play, 
Only time left is to pray
The youth are the elders of tomorrow but what about today
if they don't choose the right way
then all mankind tomorrow will lose, hey
Old man glances young man chances
The choice is yours I have the cure
Let loose speak the truths and don't let anyone tell you after
Young man still thinks he can
I'm incline to believe in the righteous ways
The advice and wisdom of the elder man

08/20/15
written by James Edward Lee Sr.
from submitted entry "UNO Poetry to Bridge Generations Elder & Youth 2015"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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