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A dvice, many seeds on a flower D eciding to choose which vine to follow V ery carefully given thought, very carefully given choice I n your best intentions stated at the heart C hosing which blossom can become an art E very seedling can change the color of your path to chart ©Holly P. Moore February 2013

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Date: 3/19/2013 9:17:00 AM
Hi Holly; This is very good. I like it and you did a good job. Lucilla
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Date: 2/28/2013 5:16:00 PM
Holly; This is very good. Thanks for sharing. I hope that you are alright. Lucilla
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Date: 2/27/2013 1:10:00 AM
Holly I love the metaphors in this, very creative...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:37:00 PM
This is a extremely tender write, very intriguing and lovely! I loved reading this intelligent poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:30:00 PM
i love your alliteration acrostic... very clever... Holly, love the changing color, and word of advice... xox~PD
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:28:00 PM
What a beautiful comparison, Molly! I found this poem very endearing! :) Thanks for sharing! Hugs!
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