Advice

A dvice, many seeds on a flower
D eciding  to choose which vine to follow
V ery carefully given thought, very carefully given choice
I n your best intentions stated at the heart
C hosing which blossom can become an art
E very seedling can change the color of your path to chart

©Holly P. Moore
   February 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Hi Holly; This is very good. I like it and you did a good job. Lucilla
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February 28, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Holly; This is very good. Thanks for sharing. I hope that you are alright. Lucilla
Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Holly I love the metaphors in this, very creative...David
Sivey Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 9:37 PM
This is a extremely tender write, very intriguing and lovely! I loved reading this intelligent poem this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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February 26, 2013 at 9:30 PM
i love your alliteration acrostic... very clever... Holly, love the changing color, and word of advice... xox~PD
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February 26, 2013 at 9:28 PM
What a beautiful comparison, Molly! I found this poem very endearing! :) Thanks for sharing! Hugs!
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