ADVENTURE PILL: JILL AND BILL

Jill and Bill glide on the rill,
Bubbling with thrills,
Embracing the chills,
Past serene hills.

Patiently yearning for gills,
Jill—with her bait and skills—
Fills her spirit with a frill,
As tranquil waters lie still.

With each catch, a hidden drill,
Bill, overjoyed, concerns distill.
Moonlit eve; savor the grill—
Jill and Bill, relish nature's will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Congrats, poet.
Buch Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:53 PM
Thank you!
Clendening Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 3:19 AM
Wow, love the rhyming, Jeta!
Buch Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:54 PM
Thank you!
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:03 AM
Great rhyming with this one, Jeta. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest! Charlie
Buch Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:53 PM
Thank you! It came across as a pleasant surprise.
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