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Adventure Begins

red suitcase, pretty girl plaid skirt, perky, sassy blue truck stopped, he wore blue jeans handsome and young, she hopped in An adventure began In small town Nebraska

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2021 8:37:00 PM

Was this you? Smiling!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 5:12:00 AM

Photo and art bring about the best poems.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2021 10:40:00 PM

It was not; it was actually from a photo Line used on a contest in AP

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/15/2021 3:20:00 PM

Caren, I love those who still follow their dreams.., especially the small town ones. I would wish them good luck and much love. In fact I still do. A Fave for me. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2021 10:40:00 PM

I am so glad Richard. Thank you!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/15/2021 11:02:00 AM

I love the innocence of this poem, Caren! I think nowadays we’ve lost that ability to seek adventure without the awful possibility of running into some sickos out there…

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2021 12:02:00 PM

I sure think we need to start trusting each other again.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/14/2021 9:37:00 PM

Oh my, is this even happening in this day and age? I am so scared for her, and hopeful the adventure is a rewarding one.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/15/2021 12:03:00 PM

I am not a bit scared. Not one bit. They are both young and hopeful.