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O' slumbers o'er swarts realm rends the hawks,
Labyrinth town, lady o' night then gawks,
Man fumbles a hand,
Zipped lady attend,
Mouse scampers pass heels, a lady balks. Date: May 22, 2019

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Date: 5/23/2019 1:33:00 PM
Another "mouse" They are all over in my super awareness consciousness today my friend!
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Date: 5/23/2019 2:57:00 PM
Got a bit 'cheesy' on its role--methinks...

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