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Advancing Years

I sometimes forget advancing years
Then a reminder blindsides me
Senior discounts, free Tuesdays
Sad eyes in my mirror
Daily aches and pains
Compensations?
Little voice
Love you
Nana

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/31/2013 6:24:00 PM
I understand completely. Becoming older. Looking in the mirror...all reminders of our mortality. Well penned. Allan
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:33:00 PM
Barbara, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:28:00 PM
Barbara, love this one... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 5:48:00 PM
Lovely vision of old age captured perfectly in this Nonet. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:21:00 AM
So sweet...Congrats on your winning nonet, Barbara! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:00:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:46:00 AM
what a sweet end to those nasty aches and pains. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:33:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Barbara
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Date: 10/2/2013 3:11:00 PM
I like this one ...very nicely penned BG
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