Barbara Gorelick Poet Nonet

Advancing Years

I sometimes forget advancing years
Then a reminder blindsides me
Senior discounts, free Tuesdays
Sad eyes in my mirror
Daily aches and pains
Compensations?
Little voice
Love you
Nana

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Allan Koven October 31, 2013 at 6:24 PM I understand completely. Becoming older. Looking in the mirror...all reminders of our mortality. Well penned. Allan

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 8:33 PM Barbara, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 10:28 PM Barbara, love this one... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA

Karen Anglesey October 21, 2013 at 5:48 PM Lovely vision of old age captured perfectly in this Nonet. Congrats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 21, 2013 at 10:21 AM So sweet...Congrats on your winning nonet, Barbara! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2013 at 9:00 AM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2013 at 1:46 AM what a sweet end to those nasty aches and pains. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 18, 2013 at 6:33 AM Congrats on the win in my contest, Barbara

Joseph May October 2, 2013 at 3:11 PM I like this one ...very nicely penned BG