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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, 07 October 2016, (c)

Oh time, My once trusted childhood friend, It is so difficult for me to accept the fact That with the passing of years You have turned into A vengeful foe! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 07 October 2016

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Daniel Turner

Date: 10/7/2016 8:13:00 AM

I may be younger in years but I have used this body extensively, so I feel more like 75 than 60. I really do not look at time as my enemy, for I have lived a full life. I now look forward to a better one. Yes, it is a booger to feel the aches and pains but I suppose at some point every debt has to be paid, right? Enjoyed reading you today, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/7/2016 8:36:00 AM

First of all let me welcome you and thank you for your visit dear Daniel! Time is our best friend and it could be also our worst enemy. Imagine that we anticipate the coming in our life of the person we love the most then our time is our best friend but what about when the one we love, in a year or so will not be with us anymore? Will still the time be our friend? The time as such, of course, is indifferent, it is our perspective of time that changes and this is what I am talking about but also the coming of old age with all the negatives it brings that are nothing to be celebrated!

Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 10/7/2016 8:12:00 AM

Time does not exist, dear friend. Life goes on in beauty ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/7/2016 8:27:00 AM

On the contrary my friend, time exists and we are its children! Look around you and see how so many have lost their mobility and aches and illnesses are the norm and then we talk again about your "Life goes on in beauty" Wish you the best though: To be healthy and happy"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/7/2016 7:41:00 AM

- When life is over on this earth .... it's too late to regret - A man is as old as he feels - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/7/2016 7:47:00 AM

My friend, although as the saying goes a man is as old as he feels may be true in many occasions it is not when he cannot move! In that case and many others the saying is not true any longer! Thank you so much for visiting dear, Anne-Lise! hugs

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/7/2016 4:16:00 AM

Really! ...even after creating so beautiful Monoku everyday mixing the warmth of sun ray ...how come ... of course I should not always look for the poet in his poem ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/7/2016 5:05:00 AM

My dearest, Probir, a man is many things at a time sometimes the philosopher takes over! Haha! Flowers are in place and always are in time! Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment! I appreciate it!