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Adult Content : Then I Do It

This recently happened to me. I didn’t recover very well from it. I just sat there naked, embarrassed, while while my partner got dressed and walked out on me. She was shaking her head in disbelief on the way out. Here is what happened. We are in the throes of mad passionate love making. I am twisted up like a pretzel with my tongue here, my fingers there, really excited, in fact my you know what was harder than Chinese mathematics. I mean my tongue is doing a Spanish Tango my fingers the Watusi my center an African Tribal Dance and when I say African Tribal Dance I mean my ass is shaking like a belly dancer with a vibrator up her ass. I could hear that sharp female voice yelling like a soprano in an Italian Opera and she’s yelling too but with that deep voice of hers like a banshee out of hell. Oh no, oh no, oh yes oh yes, oh oh oh oh... then suddenly like fireworks on the fourth of July boom...boom, boom, boom, boom... she goes. Then I do it at the peak of ****** I do it. I really blow it. No pun intended. Instead of... I mean we've all done it... instead of saying her name At the peak of ****** I yell out my own name! 09~11~2014 Knuckle Head Yvonne
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Callus Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Very entertaining my friend! Have you got the link for you tube? LoL....did you call out Maurice or Yvonne?!
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Well you told me to read, so I did, and what fun.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:28 AM
What is it Maurice?"I yell out my own name!" You are breaking my balls Uh!...always great a jerk!...love ...rajat
Nance Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:21 PM
HAHA oh man, that is great, hey you know your good when you screaming out your own name, awesome poem my friend!
Fraser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Fantastic to read, with that little twist at the end. Laughing out loud here, having read it a few times. Way to go, or not in that case, James.......
Kiser Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:57 PM
I'm blindsided...totally unexpected, but hilarious ending.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 12:31 AM
hahahaha. OH LORDY!!! How you do go on!!! You got me with that one. i did not expect THAT!!!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Lol, I can only agree with Jack Horne.
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:14 PM
lol, well, I guess it's better than calling out another woman's name - good one!
Bateman Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Maurice . . . This one's great my Man!! You never fail me with the fine variations of your poetry. So much about Chinese Mathematics!! This one is going into my Maurice Yvonne "FAV Greats," and is a "7." Best Always, Gary
Lawless Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 1:26 PM
So "MAURICE!!!!!" This should teach us never to pick up a dance instructor at last call. and to have nothing to do with a Chinese mathematician. Thanks for the laugh, even at your own (or her) expense.
Chircop Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 1:22 PM
: )Hilarious ending to the ritual ..lol : )
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:55 AM
LOL - bet you weren't asked for an encore:-) hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:13 AM
Guess you were practicing too much...love it my friend....better luck next time
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