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Adrift In a Wish

trailed by stardust the first star of twilight where i scatter my wishes glitters like your eyes locked in the depths of mine the gossamer breeze caresses my skin like a tongued whisper escaping your winded breath within the thrust of night i arch myself blandly in the contours of shadows aglow with the lambency of moon adrift in wishes of you

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2019 3:43:00 PM

Magnificently stunning my friend. You have used words I never even dream of.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 5:09:00 PM

thank you my friend...i rarely ever write softer poems, but autumn spins my muse in all directions :) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/20/2019 9:18:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 9:26:00 AM

Thank you....sometimes my muse plays with nice thoughts :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/20/2019 7:50:00 AM

You set the stage perfectly, Sandy..to be adrift in wishes...soft and delicate poem!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 8:24:00 AM

Thank you my friend :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/20/2019 6:56:00 AM

I absolutely love that last line, " adrift in wishes of you" Now I am adrift in wishes that I had written that. Such beautiful thoughts seem to flow effortlessly from your pen my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 7:15:00 AM

Thank you my friend for such a sweet comment, perhaps that line will trigger a poem from your romantic pen :) hugs