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Adrift In a Wish

trailed by stardust
the first star of twilight
where i scatter my wishes
glitters like your eyes
locked in the depths of mine

the gossamer breeze
caresses my skin
like a tongued whisper
escaping your winded breath
within the thrust of night

i arch myself blandly
in the contours of shadows
aglow with the lambency of moon
adrift in wishes of you

Copyright © Sandra Adams | Year Posted 2019

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/20/2019 3:43:00 PM Magnificently stunning my friend. You have used words I never even dream of. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 5:09:00 PM thank you my friend...i rarely ever write softer poems, but autumn spins my muse in all directions :) hugs

Line Gauthier Date: 9/20/2019 9:18:00 AM Absolutely beautiful, Sandra. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 9:26:00 AM Thank you....sometimes my muse plays with nice thoughts :) hugs

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/20/2019 7:50:00 AM You set the stage perfectly, Sandy..to be adrift in wishes...soft and delicate poem! Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 8:24:00 AM Thank you my friend :) hugs

Chris Green Date: 9/20/2019 6:56:00 AM I absolutely love that last line, " adrift in wishes of you" Now I am adrift in wishes that I had written that. Such beautiful thoughts seem to flow effortlessly from your pen my friend. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 7:15:00 AM Thank you my friend for such a sweet comment, perhaps that line will trigger a poem from your romantic pen :) hugs

Brenda Chiri Date: 9/20/2019 1:45:00 AM Beautiful! I love this!;) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 7:14:00 AM Thank you my friend :) hugs

Hello There Date: 9/19/2019 10:56:00 PM Sensuality at its best ~ very nice! (very very ;) Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2019 7:13:00 AM Thank you :)

Curtis Moorman Date: 9/19/2019 8:04:00 PM WOW! You really nailed it, girl! So captivating. A FAV for me. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/19/2019 8:44:00 PM well thank you for your comment and the honors of a fave! :)