Paloma P Poet Free verse

Adrift Endings

Hauntingly explicit, plighted
  in yesterday's cloaked mystery,
wafting as whispers through
 wistfully grayed memories on dimly 
          recalled moonlit indulgences,
winding imprecise hazy endings
    beyond darkly covert horizons

 love isn't blind, it's persistently unsighted 
                by distantly echoed adrift endings

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Joanna Daniel November 24, 2016 at 1:03 AM I'm adrift after reading your lovely poem, Paloma:) you write as beautifully as you are:) love your unique use of language:)

Charmaine Chircop November 23, 2016 at 2:54 PM Love is persistently unsighted indeed...and crazy too...Love this one Paloma..A fave.

Chris Green November 23, 2016 at 1:40 PM Now it is my mind that is adrift with no ending in sight and I kind of like it that way, especially when reading one of your poems. Love definitely isn't blind but it's vision can often be obscured but what it may recall seeing in the past. Nicely expressed Paloma. Paloma P November 23, 2016 at 1:46 PM Like minds and all that jazz Chris. :) Much thanks, you're always so kind.