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Adrift Endings

Hauntingly explicit, plighted in yesterday's cloaked mystery, wafting as whispers through wistfully grayed memories on dimly recalled moonlit indulgences, winding imprecise hazy endings beyond darkly covert horizons love isn't blind, it's persistently unsighted by distantly echoed adrift endings

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/24/2016 1:03:00 AM

I'm adrift after reading your lovely poem, Paloma:) you write as beautifully as you are:) love your unique use of language:)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/23/2016 2:54:00 PM

Love is persistently unsighted indeed...and crazy too...Love this one Paloma..A fave.

Chris Green

Date: 11/23/2016 1:40:00 PM

Now it is my mind that is adrift with no ending in sight and I kind of like it that way, especially when reading one of your poems. Love definitely isn't blind but it's vision can often be obscured but what it may recall seeing in the past. Nicely expressed Paloma.

Paloma P
Date: 11/23/2016 1:46:00 PM

Like minds and all that jazz Chris. :) Much thanks, you're always so kind.