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Adrift At Sea

For years this ship has been sailing the seas
From the beaches of Hawaii to the Florida Keys
With no land in sight and no view of atolls
The ship was used to pitches, yaws and rolls

Alas, land has been spotted ahead
After four years of feeling left for dead
No more sorrow or lonely, sad songs
Just happiness that good fortune has finally come along

Like an island to Odysseus’ men many years ago
This island is what the captain has wished he would go
After so far away from love and compassion
This was not an example of instant satisfaction

This ship has suddenly turned engines on to full throttle
And its captain now drinks rum from a bottle
Never again he wishes to see
His ship out of love and adrift at sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/7/2016 2:29:00 PM
ANDREW, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 5/24/2014 9:11:00 PM
Your title caught my eye, Andrew because i have actually been adrift at sea, Your tale mixed with sea jargon is spun very well. Blessings, Carl
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