Russell Sivey Poet Tanka

Adorning My Front Yard

Grass perfectly grown
A lovely white picket fence
Bushes trimmed nicely
All adorn my great front yard
Gorgeous dreamy and wondrous

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Francine Roberts’s “the view – a tanka” contest
Written: 9/6/11; September 6th, 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 8:49 AM Wishing you the best in the contest Russell. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 6, 2011 at 9:03 PM You must live in a place with a lot of water :) Noone around me has a lush yard :) Your yard sounds fantastic and you wrote a sweet little poem. Good luck in the contest!

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2011 at 9:00 PM The house with white picket fence, the american dream you surely have!! and a dreamy little poem!!

Charlotte Puddifoot September 6, 2011 at 7:01 PM good entry for the contest, paints a vivid picture...thanks for your kind words on my lanterne :-)

Francine Roberts September 6, 2011 at 6:38 PM this is not showing up on the contest page, please check that it has been entered Francine Roberts September 6, 2011 at 6:55 PM got it now , thanks Russell Sivey September 6, 2011 at 6:41 PM Thanks for the head's up Francine! It's on there now!

Michael J. Falotico September 6, 2011 at 6:10 PM Very nice view you have out your window my friend.. Jealous I am..... Great write for the contest.... Michael