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ADORNED IN PINK ORGANZA

Searching the twilight horizon For signs she's on her way As I anticipate her rising Have felt like this all day The cloud begins to gather Betwixt the sea and sky I welcome her arrival She makes my spirit fly Just as I start to doubt That tonight she will come out A delicate glow A glow I know Rises from the sea Just like the Goddess Amphitrite Adorned in pink organza As if she wants to dance all night Resplendent in her glittering gown Her dazzling light is beaming down This ballerina of the sky I do not blink ~ I am wide eyed I'm moonstruck and I'm mesmerised To see such wonder with my eyes Her beauty seeps inside my soul I hear sweet music all around My head is spinning to the sound For now I'm in another place Moonbeams lighting up my face Gazing at this Super Moon I swoon ~ I may not be back soon… Written 8th May 2020 ~ after witnessing the hypnotic beauty of the Super Moon Contest Brian's Choice 6 Sponsor Brian Strand 2nd PLACE

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Date: 5/14/2020 2:18:00 AM
Your personification is perfect! "Just like the Goddess Amphitrite Adorned in pink organza As if she wants to dance all night Resplendent in her glittering gown" Wow Ann. Wow!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/14/2020 9:46:00 AM
I love that you 'get it' dear Caren, sometimes my muse goes right off the scale and I cannot believe what comes into my head, but I do love it when it happens; it is quite intoxicating! Thank you for your fabulous commemts my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/11/2020 1:09:00 PM
Such a happy Moon! Such a joyful vision...perfectly expressed. Love it!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/11/2020 1:30:00 PM
How kind of you to say so Joe ~ thank you so much and I am so pleased you loved it. Did you see the Super Moon Joe? Thanks for your lovely visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/9/2020 10:17:00 AM
Wow Ann ~ this is lovely.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/9/2020 3:10:00 PM
So pleased you enjoyed it Line thank you. Did you see the Super Moon? I get great comfort from gazing up at her ~ such exquisite beauty takes my breath away everytime. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/9/2020 6:15:00 AM
She is the ultimate Goddess. So gorgeous!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/9/2020 7:23:00 AM
Yes, she most certainly is! Thank you Caren, i hope you saw her too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/8/2020 3:00:00 PM
I too saw it Ann, I was spellbound, something magical about the moon, bet it looked amazing where you are. Hope you're well Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/9/2020 2:02:00 AM
Wasn't it fabulous Tom! I adore the moon, so as you can see once again I was inspired to write about her... Hope you are well Tom and keeping safe from the nasty virus. Take care. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 5/8/2020 12:42:00 PM
what a sight to see so beautifully described in such vivid detail shame I missed seeing the moon draped in organza!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/9/2020 2:04:00 AM
hahaha... yes my muse went wild when I saw the Moon Jan, I walked to the beach and watched her rise from the sea, wow... it was spectacular, sorry you missed it. I do hope you and your family are keeping safe and well dear Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx