Ann Gilmour Poet Rhyme

Adorned In Pink Organza

Searching the twilight horizon
For signs she's on her way
As I anticipate her rising
Have felt like this all day
The cloud begins to gather
Betwixt the sea and sky
I welcome her arrival
She makes my spirit fly
Just as I start to doubt
That tonight she will come out
A delicate glow  
A glow I know 
Rises from the sea
Just like the Goddess Amphitrite
Adorned in pink organza 
As if she wants to dance all night
Resplendent in her glittering gown
Her dazzling light is beaming down 
This ballerina of the sky
I do not blink ~ I am wide eyed
I'm moonstruck and I'm mesmerised
To see such wonder with my eyes
Her beauty seeps inside my soul
I hear sweet music all around
My head is spinning to the sound
For now I'm in another place
Moonbeams lighting up my face
Gazing at this Super Moon
I swoon ~ I may not be back soon…

Written 8th May 2020 ~ after witnessing the hypnotic beauty of the Super Moon 

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Line Gauthier February 24, 2021 at 5:52 PM Awesome poem, Ann ~ Ann Gilmour February 25, 2021 at 1:06 PM Wow thanks LIne xxx

Caren Krutsinger May 14, 2020 at 2:18 AM Your personification is perfect! "Just like the Goddess Amphitrite Adorned in pink organza As if she wants to dance all night Resplendent in her glittering gown" Wow Ann. Wow! Ann Gilmour May 14, 2020 at 9:46 AM I love that you 'get it' dear Caren, sometimes my muse goes right off the scale and I cannot believe what comes into my head, but I do love it when it happens; it is quite intoxicating! Thank you for your fabulous commemts my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joseph P. DiMino May 11, 2020 at 1:09 PM Such a happy Moon! Such a joyful vision...perfectly expressed. Love it! Ann Gilmour May 11, 2020 at 1:30 PM How kind of you to say so Joe ~ thank you so much and I am so pleased you loved it. Did you see the Super Moon Joe? Thanks for your lovely visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier May 9, 2020 at 10:17 AM Wow Ann ~ this is lovely. Ann Gilmour May 9, 2020 at 3:10 PM So pleased you enjoyed it Line thank you. Did you see the Super Moon? I get great comfort from gazing up at her ~ such exquisite beauty takes my breath away everytime. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger May 9, 2020 at 6:15 AM She is the ultimate Goddess. So gorgeous! Ann Gilmour May 9, 2020 at 7:23 AM Yes, she most certainly is! Thank you Caren, i hope you saw her too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham May 8, 2020 at 3:00 PM I too saw it Ann, I was spellbound, something magical about the moon, bet it looked amazing where you are. Hope you're well Tom Ann Gilmour May 9, 2020 at 2:02 AM Wasn't it fabulous Tom! I adore the moon, so as you can see once again I was inspired to write about her... Hope you are well Tom and keeping safe from the nasty virus. Take care. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison May 8, 2020 at 12:42 PM what a sight to see so beautifully described in such vivid detail shame I missed seeing the moon draped in organza!!:-) hugs Jan xx Ann Gilmour May 9, 2020 at 2:04 AM hahaha... yes my muse went wild when I saw the Moon Jan, I walked to the beach and watched her rise from the sea, wow... it was spectacular, sorry you missed it. I do hope you and your family are keeping safe and well dear Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx