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Adorn the Night

My love, I call you opaline; you dazzle like a jewel, extending passion’s brilliant hues, when chill of night seems cruel. My iridescent evening star, adorning canvas sky, I know your fiery radiance and ache to feel you nigh. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 3/27/15 for Nette's Let Me Feel Your Lines Contest Theme - #6 Opaline

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Date: 2/19/2017 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully penned and right to the point!
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:10:00 PM
wonderful win
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:33:00 PM
Way to go with this winner!! Congrats!! Sara
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:19:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting, Rhonda! I can truly feel your lines! Congratulations on a deserved win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:09:00 AM
Again, you dazzle with your write, Rhonda. Congratulations! Kim
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Rhonda:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:50:00 PM
Absolutely beautifully penned Rhonda:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:20:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 5/14/2015 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Rhonda! I really feel the evening magic your lines. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:23:00 AM
great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7
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Date: 4/7/2015 9:19:00 AM
This is so beautiful! You truly have a talent! I am very glad I visited. Another 7 from me!
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Date: 3/28/2015 6:49:00 PM
I love the words "ache to feel you nigh". Rhonda I love saying this one out loud. It more than speaks it sings to me.
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