Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Rhyme

Adorn the Night

My love, I call you opaline;
you dazzle like a jewel,
extending passion’s brilliant hues,  
when chill of night seems cruel.  

My iridescent evening star,
adorning canvas sky,
I know your fiery radiance
and ache to feel you nigh.

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 3/27/15
for Nette's Let Me Feel Your Lines Contest
Theme - #6 Opaline

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Donna Roberts February 19, 2017 at 9:38 AM Beautifully penned and right to the point!

Eve Roper May 15, 2015 at 9:10 PM wonderful win

Sara Kendrick May 15, 2015 at 12:33 PM Way to go with this winner!! Congrats!! Sara

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 12:19 PM Absolutely enchanting, Rhonda! I can truly feel your lines! Congratulations on a deserved win. Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez May 15, 2015 at 4:09 AM Again, you dazzle with your write, Rhonda. Congratulations! Kim

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:39 PM Rhonda:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 5:50 PM Absolutely beautifully penned Rhonda:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:20 PM Rhonda, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Sandra Haight May 14, 2015 at 4:57 PM Beautiful, Rhonda! I really feel the evening magic your lines. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Funom Makama April 20, 2015 at 8:23 AM great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7

Anna Hopper April 7, 2015 at 9:19 AM This is so beautiful! You truly have a talent! I am very glad I visited. Another 7 from me!

Maurice Yvonne March 28, 2015 at 6:49 PM I love the words "ache to feel you nigh". Rhonda I love saying this one out loud. It more than speaks it sings to me.