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Adorn the Night

My love, I call you opaline;
you dazzle like a jewel,
extending passion’s brilliant hues,  
when chill of night seems cruel.  

My iridescent evening star,
adorning canvas sky,
I know your fiery radiance
and ache to feel you nigh.

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 3/27/15
for Nette's Let Me Feel Your Lines Contest
Theme - #6 Opaline 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/19/2017 9:38:00 AM
Beautifully penned and right to the point!
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:55:00 PM
Rhonda.. Fabulous setting, incredible lines, perfect rhyme.. Expected win!
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:10:00 PM
wonderful win
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:33:00 PM
Way to go with this winner!! Congrats!! Sara
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Date: 5/15/2015 12:19:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting, Rhonda! I can truly feel your lines! Congratulations on a deserved win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/15/2015 4:09:00 AM
Again, you dazzle with your write, Rhonda. Congratulations! Kim
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Rhonda:-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:50:00 PM
Absolutely beautifully penned Rhonda:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:20:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 5/14/2015 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful, Rhonda! I really feel the evening magic your lines. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:23:00 AM
great poem. As promised, I returned and I am glad I did because the freshness of your talents are yet again exhibited through these wonderful lines. Definitely a 7
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Date: 4/7/2015 9:19:00 AM
This is so beautiful! You truly have a talent! I am very glad I visited. Another 7 from me!
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Date: 3/28/2015 6:49:00 PM
I love the words "ache to feel you nigh". Rhonda I love saying this one out loud. It more than speaks it sings to me.
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