Tim Smith Poet Romanticism

Adored

Sunlight rest as so does she 
and into the night 
a peaceful light   streaks 
cross hidden bridges 
bringing a sullen sense 
of tranquility to her sleep 

And when light returns again 
her eyes like gold will shine 
and her heart     will beat 
while be known  my thoughts 
alone      bare her name 
into endless     eternity 

Shadows take a rightful place 
sway with    grace and ease 
a sacred silhouette     beheld 
along with breaths   captured 
in every step    I can only see 
beyond      a special type 
of beautiful          adored

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Sunita U.D Palawon February 6, 2017 at 10:28 AM Really romantic and full of adoration. Congrats on your POTD. :)

Bernardo F. Asuncion February 6, 2017 at 12:48 AM Sweet poem... congrats on being chosen....

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 6, 2017 at 12:27 AM I adore this lovely, romantic poem, Tim...congrats!! L&B, Rhonda

Cindi Rockwell February 5, 2017 at 10:27 PM Lovely. Congrats on POTD! ~Cindi~

Alexis Y. February 5, 2017 at 2:55 PM Hi Tim, This is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 3:34 PM Thank you very much Alexis

Darren White February 5, 2017 at 2:00 PM Coming back to you with congratulations for PotD :) Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:21 PM Thanks again...

Jan Allison February 5, 2017 at 1:11 PM beautiful and romantic Tim congrats on POTD:-) they have some fab poems chosen recently:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:20 PM Thanks Jan...there sure has been.

Winged Warrior February 5, 2017 at 11:06 AM Beautifully done, Tim old boy...your verse is adored lol...Congrats!!! on potd...god bless...^WW^ Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:19 PM Thank you my warrior friend

Charmaine Chircop February 5, 2017 at 10:35 AM Well done..Congratulations..on your well deserved poem of the day...WoW... :) Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:17 PM grazzi

Akkina Downing February 5, 2017 at 9:23 AM Sooooooo romantic and full of love... Congratulation on potd Tim, it's absolutely beautiful :) Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:16 PM Thank you kindly Akkina

Laura Hay February 5, 2017 at 9:21 AM Simply beautiful! A 7 :) Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:14 PM Thank you Laura...a terrific compliment :)

Gary Bateman February 5, 2017 at 8:14 AM Tim, A beautiful poem indeed. Congrats on POTD!! Cheers and Best, Gary Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:13 PM Hey, great to see you Gary....thank you

Charlie Smith February 5, 2017 at 8:00 AM Lovely, congratulations Tim for POTD honors... Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:12 PM Thanks Charlie...I am honoured

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 5, 2017 at 7:28 AM Stunning poem! Congrats Tim Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:05 PM Thank you so much Maureen

Susan Palli February 5, 2017 at 7:18 AM Wonderful feelings depicted in such a sublime way! Nice one, Tim! Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:01 PM Thanks so much Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2017 at 5:27 AM - Congratulations, Tim ! :) Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:02 PM Thanks A-L : )

Chuck Melugin February 4, 2017 at 5:58 PM Tim, you sure know how How to mesmerize a lady! I love the line "a special type of beautiful" ! My friend, Richard Leigh wrote a song titled, She's Busy Being Beautiful For Me. You are one talented guy! My best to you, chuck Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 2:00 PM Thanks so much Chuck

Darren White February 4, 2017 at 8:31 AM Wonderfully crafted visually too... And so romantic. Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thank you my friend

Nette Onclaud February 4, 2017 at 7:56 AM endearing love song from your spilled pen, tim... you are truly a romantic soul!..huggs Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 1:57 PM Thank you nette

Arthur Vaso February 3, 2017 at 9:58 PM You romantic! Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 1:53 PM : )

White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 5:54 PM You are a romantic, Tim! Lovely poem mate! Tim Smith February 5, 2017 at 1:51 PM Thanks Budgie

Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2017 at 3:24 PM - A beautiful and romantic poems, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith February 3, 2017 at 5:22 PM Thank you A-L

Daniel Turner February 3, 2017 at 3:20 PM You've been watching too much satellite TV:) Very romantic daydreams, Tim. You are such a romantic! Tim Smith February 3, 2017 at 5:21 PM They have all the Danielle Steele books at the library...shhh

Carolyn Devonshire February 3, 2017 at 1:01 PM Tim, your wife is so lucky to have such a romantic husband. The reader can feel your happiness and adoration throughout the poem. I think I know what you'll be doing on Valentine's night. Beautiful!! Arthur Vaso February 3, 2017 at 9:58 PM Well at least your up for auction, me I am being sold at at a garage sale! Tim Smith February 3, 2017 at 5:20 PM Ten years ago yes, I'm up for auction this year. Donations to your favorite charity.

Charmaine Chircop February 3, 2017 at 12:35 PM Extremely romantic and beautiful this is.. A fave. Tim Smith February 3, 2017 at 5:18 PM Thank you so much Charma.

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