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Sunlight rest as so does she and into the night a peaceful light streaks cross hidden bridges bringing a sullen sense of tranquility to her sleep And when light returns again her eyes like gold will shine and her heart will beat while be known my thoughts alone bare her name into endless eternity Shadows take a rightful place sway with grace and ease a sacred silhouette beheld along with breaths captured in every step I can only see beyond a special type of beautiful adored

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Date: 2/6/2017 10:28:00 AM
Really romantic and full of adoration. Congrats on your POTD. :)
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Date: 2/6/2017 12:48:00 AM
Sweet poem... congrats on being chosen....
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Date: 2/6/2017 12:27:00 AM
I adore this lovely, romantic poem, Tim...congrats!! L&B, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:27:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on POTD! ~Cindi~
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Date: 2/5/2017 2:55:00 PM
Hi Tim, This is so beautiful and romantic. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis
Date: 2/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
Coming back to you with congratulations for PotD :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:21:00 PM
Thanks again...
Date: 2/5/2017 1:11:00 PM
beautiful and romantic Tim congrats on POTD:-) they have some fab poems chosen recently:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Jan...there sure has been.
Date: 2/5/2017 11:06:00 AM
Beautifully done, Tim old boy...your verse is adored lol...Congrats!!! on potd...god bless...^WW^
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thank you my warrior friend
Date: 2/5/2017 10:35:00 AM
Well done..Congratulations..on your well deserved poem of the day...WoW... :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:17:00 PM
grazzi
Date: 2/5/2017 9:23:00 AM
Sooooooo romantic and full of love... Congratulation on potd Tim, it's absolutely beautiful :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you kindly Akkina
Date: 2/5/2017 9:21:00 AM
Simply beautiful! A 7 :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Laura...a terrific compliment :)
Date: 2/5/2017 8:14:00 AM
Tim, A beautiful poem indeed. Congrats on POTD!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:13:00 PM
Hey, great to see you Gary....thank you
Date: 2/5/2017 8:00:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations Tim for POTD honors...
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Charlie...I am honoured
Date: 2/5/2017 7:28:00 AM
Stunning poem! Congrats Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen
Date: 2/5/2017 7:18:00 AM
Wonderful feelings depicted in such a sublime way! Nice one, Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan
Date: 2/5/2017 5:27:00 AM
- Congratulations, Tim ! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:02:00 PM
Thanks A-L : )
Date: 2/4/2017 5:58:00 PM
Tim, you sure know how How to mesmerize a lady! I love the line "a special type of beautiful" ! My friend, Richard Leigh wrote a song titled, She's Busy Being Beautiful For Me. You are one talented guy! My best to you, chuck
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 2:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Chuck
Date: 2/4/2017 8:31:00 AM
Wonderfully crafted visually too... And so romantic.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 2/4/2017 7:56:00 AM
endearing love song from your spilled pen, tim... you are truly a romantic soul!..huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thank you nette
Date: 2/3/2017 9:58:00 PM
You romantic!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 1:53:00 PM
: )
Date: 2/3/2017 5:54:00 PM
You are a romantic, Tim! Lovely poem mate!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/5/2017 1:51:00 PM
Thanks Budgie
Date: 2/3/2017 3:24:00 PM
- A beautiful and romantic poems, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/3/2017 5:22:00 PM
Thank you A-L
Date: 2/3/2017 3:20:00 PM
You've been watching too much satellite TV:) Very romantic daydreams, Tim. You are such a romantic!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/3/2017 5:21:00 PM
They have all the Danielle Steele books at the library...shhh
Date: 2/3/2017 1:01:00 PM
Tim, your wife is so lucky to have such a romantic husband. The reader can feel your happiness and adoration throughout the poem. I think I know what you'll be doing on Valentine's night. Beautiful!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/3/2017 9:58:00 PM
Well at least your up for auction, me I am being sold at at a garage sale!
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/3/2017 5:20:00 PM
Ten years ago yes, I'm up for auction this year. Donations to your favorite charity.
Date: 2/3/2017 12:35:00 PM
Extremely romantic and beautiful this is.. A fave.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/3/2017 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Charma.
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