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Adoration

The world left no room for us In this lifetime But my heart builds universes Where we live out our days Full of adoration Free of reservation Swimming in a sea of you I delightfully and decidedly drown Breathing you in until every cell of me is permeated with some of you A sliver of me forevermore absent from this present world perpetually existing in our personal cosmos Living out our days Free of reservation Full of adoration

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Date: 8/3/2023 4:52:00 AM
Hey you're good, and I see some semblance of mine here. A personal cosmos for two ... Sounds enticing
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Paloma Walker
Date: 8/9/2023 3:28:00 PM
Your work is beautiful, so any semblance is a huge compliment. Thank you!

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