Adonis In the Making

Some would describe me as an adonis Now that's going a little over the top-is A gorgeous specimen I stick to my regimen Eating fruits and veggies and yummy grasses © Jack Ellison 2016
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Nunez Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Agree with 1st 4 lines. About the 5th...did you mean vegies? :-))) Hi Santa. How've you been? Here's wishing you the best this 2016! hugs
Ellison Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:48 AM
You are right Miss Kimmie! I fixed it! I have missed you... Happy 2016, my dear sweetie! Love, Jack xoxoxxo
Eastman Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Summer watermelon helps me be thin... If that's the proper word my friend... Fruits and berries yum-yum to the end... Me-They mezmerize as a great dividend... My favorite foods on which I love to depend... PS. The grasses not so much... LOL
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January 4, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Have had a salad for lunch EVERY day for about the last 5 years and I'm still pudgie! LOL xoxox
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