Adonis

Routinely walk the mall, almost every morning Girlies crowd around by the dozens without warning Try to discourage them These yummy femmes No use, with this adonis-like body adorning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Cresswell Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:38 AM
Oh my goodness. Well I guess you are a very busy fellow. A good and gracious good morning. Another ball out of the park.
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August 10, 2017 at 2:11 PM
How are you going to celebrate and also "Hippo Birdies Two Ewes". Patricia
Ellison Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:35 AM
Oops... 82! Let's not rush it! (as if one year makes a difference at my age!!!) xxx
Ellison Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:33 AM
It's the inside that counts anyway!!! I'll be 83 tomorrow... no flowers please.... money is okay though! Love to you from me!!! xxx
Cresswell Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Bless your heart Mr. Bones I am no longer considered young even by me. But that is just my outsides.
Ellison Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Gracious me!!! A phrase from the past!!! I'm having a ball this a.m. talkig with you young ladies!!! Love, Jacko xxx
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Hey, Jackson...check out my Smelling Bad limerick...right up your alley my friend!
Ellison Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Heading there right now!!!
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Ah, do you celebrate your body much my friend!? You have comical, and delightfully funny! Thank you for my morning laugh, at your expense nonetheless! "No use, with this adonis-like body adorning," Yeah, funny! Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 7:58 AM
You have no idea what turmoil this adonis-like body causes! I am cursed!!! lol
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