Adonis

The sun shines again for he smiles dreaming.
The indeterminable day no longer flees or hides
for its end is sought, as is its beginning
as I lay beside him in love seeming.

Though at peace, confusion’s thoughts abide
waiting there as laggard servants shying
scolded by the Mistress Aphrodite
his form akin to Lord Ares lying.

Now, Want must find a different dwelling
and Need must now within my heart reside
for oh love, sweet love, has come a calling
on the wings of Eros it did arrive.

For he smiles and joy of sweetest joy, I cry.
to stay forever in his arms, I’ll try.
 
Poet: D. Guzzi
6/14/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 6:52 PM
I love sonnets and this one is just great.
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June 17, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Many congrats on your win in 'Sonnets', Debs : )
Brown Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 10:35 PM
Beatiful, Debs! Congratulations.
Roberts Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:55 PM
congrats on your 6th place win in the contest Debbie, wonderful sonnet, just wonderful
Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful win with this splendid Sonnet luv..enjoy another wow win..
Long Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 2:15 PM
this was very nice I enjoyed the 2nd stanza best. love cory
Beck Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Yeah, I likes it Debs, and the first and third stanzas in particular ....maybe those goldarned iambs could be made to earn their pay a bit more....as always, best wishes ...Syd
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:28 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Debbie. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2011 at 8:45 AM
A beautiful write here dear poet ! You def. have a way with these writes my friend ! I enjoyed very much ! Have a beautiful week Debbie ! much love, james
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June 15, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Very poetic sonnet..Enjoyed reading this morn..If for a contest, good luck..Thanks for stopping by my work about the Bilberry Kiss..I should have said that the American Blueberry and Huckleberry are closely related to the European Bilberry..Sara
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