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Adolescence

‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘ ‘’’’’’’ Angular hips now more round than grapes grieving a little for new voice whispered, swells of flesh curved in plumper shapes while the flow of monthly arrival lingered Almond eyes grew sultry deepening hue baby powder blending into lavender spray this crossover of rebellion I harshly knew, awkwardly choosing between truth or dare-play. Then, nights gazed at sandals of childhood seas toes raking, confused about dissent down path; a ruffled star finding myself sliced by cold trees as Mom screeched at moody blues ready to hatch My mind felt strange; Dad became a fading hero questioning him with glares longer than steam, rude awakenings cracked fears, tears stuck at zero with ripening bosoms; this turning point at thirteen Struggling for identity bloomed in freshman year when tresses climbed on stairs of clumsy romance beguiled by some hunger in my bones, a blushed cheer; exalting the senses, a lady-in-waiting for her first dance. © ‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’ For Frank Herrera: Coming of Age By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2014 8:52:00 AM
Nette This is so well written and captures the meaning of the contest so well. I could feel your heart pouring out of each line. Thank you for the nice comment on my Lifes Path poem.
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:19:00 PM
NETTE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/29/2012 3:47:00 AM
i really enjoyed stopping by and reading this rhyming poem.... congrats....sublime expressions .........~sashi
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Date: 2/27/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 9:37:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on a terrific win for this sensational creative write .. a ,movimg piece for sure luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:54:00 PM
A natural feel and flow here Miss Nette with the poise and grace of all your poetry of course and your magnificent command of language. I think you captured the essence of the theme in perfect fashion, good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:39:00 AM
I take pride dear poet, in regards my terse thoughts with write; yet here, it would have to be dialog to express the thoughts which are strolling through this souls mind after reading this powerful write of yours Nette ! There is no thought provoking here my friend; you have plainly, with the poesy, delivered the message ! I pray that your expressive heart has found some form of content Nette....Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:18:00 AM
Wow Nette, you sure do know how to put together a really great poem! I could see the coming of age as you described it in each line of your beautiful write! You did this so very well! You have written a fantastic poem my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:27:00 AM
Aw sweet heart don't look anymore we know you are there Just ask. glad I knocked your socks off but put them back now it's chilly. Love this x
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Date: 2/7/2012 8:23:00 AM
a magnificent masterpiece Nette luv.. one of the finest and most creative piece I have read from your gifted pen luv.. good luck in the contest.. a vivid portrait painted luv..
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Date: 2/7/2012 3:40:00 AM
Lovely like always Nette,good luck in contest!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:41:00 AM
Soupmail returned Nette........
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:56:00 AM
Smile ˜ Hey Beautiful Nette, feel Your heart felt Your heart Love Your Heart ˜ Its All good baby girl * My love to, You * Always, John!:) ˜
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:46:00 AM
A soupmail from India to Phillipines is flying...................:......................................
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:39:00 AM
An awesome write!!A fav!!This should top the chart.
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:36:00 AM
Yes!I am first here!!
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