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Admission

Aura of angry students filled the arena.... Breath of depression brushed against my bare cheek... So much seeking knowledge under the wings of desperation... Yet,lost in where I tot I'll get a chance to complete my destination.. Sapiens of different habit wandered into bondage.. Murmurs of troubled hearts flowed with the wind Here I am regretting my decision Struggling to break the shackles of seeking admission

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Sherifat Aduku

Date: 9/29/2017 11:43:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this poem, Nice piece. Getting admission can be hell most times.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/20/2017 11:54:00 AM

I truly enjoyed reading this poem, Alexander, it sounds like you are in school wanting to immerse yourself into what education can give to you, but struggling with the living surroundings. If that is the case stay strong and keep fighting to break the shackles. You are very important and life owes you that education to succeed in life. I also see you are new to Soup I want to say welcome Eve ~`*