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As I look you over from top to bottom, I'm rendered speechless. It feels as if my arrested eyes are tricking my mind. You take my breath away; so beautiful! Your elegance is a treat to behold, my queen. You look mighty fine, dare I say, more beautiful than all the colorful gardens I see in spring. Trust me, Aphrodite's got nothing on you! You're much more welcoming to the eyes than blood diamonds gleaming in the sun. And you wield your sex appeal with a knife-like precision, my sweet potato pie! You could make any man's knees jiggle like Jello; you make mine crumble! Spin for me now; twirl around slow like a dervish so I take a peek from the back... Oh, you got it going on, bae! If only you could see your silky black hair slowly tumbling down your shoulder in curls. It's poetry in motion! Your dangling earrings almost hypnotize me. I'm looking you all over and it's almost like I'm meeting you anew! You look as pretty as your smile, my dear. Keep that smile on your face that glows like the moon. Rock on with your bad self! ALL YOURS (JAN25) (Winner: 1st Place) Contest Judged: 1/26/2021 Sponsored by Brian Strand Date written: 01/24/2021

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Date: 1/26/2021 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/26/2021 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:-) God bless
Date: 1/25/2021 5:20:00 AM
There is much rhythm in your free verse for it speaks of tender love. Sweet and romantic--I'm sure she loves it!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/25/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) Good call! It's my wife's favorite at the moment.

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