Admiring You
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As I look you over from top to bottom,
I'm rendered speechless. It feels as if
my arrested eyes are tricking my mind.
You take my breath away; so beautiful!
Your elegance is a treat to behold, my queen.
You look mighty fine, dare I say, more beautiful
than all the colorful gardens I see in spring.
Trust me, Aphrodite's got nothing on you!
You're much more welcoming to the eyes
than blood diamonds gleaming in the sun.
And you wield your sex appeal
with a knife-like precision, my sweet potato pie!
You could make any man's knees
jiggle like Jello; you make mine crumble!
Spin for me now; twirl around slow
like a dervish so I take a peek from the back...
Oh, you got it going on, bae! If only you could see
your silky black hair slowly tumbling down
your shoulder in curls. It's poetry in motion!
Your dangling earrings almost hypnotize me.
I'm looking you all over
and it's almost like I'm meeting you anew!
You look as pretty as your smile, my dear.
Keep that smile on your face that glows
like the moon. Rock on with your bad self!
ALL YOURS (JAN25) (Winner: 1st Place)
Contest Judged: 1/26/2021
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 01/24/2021
Copyright © Edward Ibeh | Year Posted 2021
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