Admiration

Your oval face highlighting your thick red lips, 
Subject to a projection of enthusiasm, 
Always seeking to promote a prank,
 With pasion to always conote optimism, 
Traces evidently on measures of safety tips, 
Illusions trespases reality of the day, 
Expression misunderstood lids many astray,
 Alas! Engraved in my heart is your name, 
Giving credence 2 ur character like a dame,
 Simplicity remains a major depositor in our emotional bank,
 My pen growing willfuly into criticism, 
Notwithstanding your glamour comands a serious play, 
The intention of which is 2 step up our game, 
Thus you remain a perfect candidate to lead my hall of fame.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Anderson-Throop Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 4:18 AM
Simplicity remains a major depositor in our emotional bank nice line!
Yusuf Avatar
March 17, 2013 at 6:44 AM
Thx a lot 4 d encouragement...... Expect more from me......
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