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Admiration

Permit me to shower my love to you You conquered my world like an angel No I have found what I am looking for It’s you and your guidance nothing more You offer me the best always May you don’t know what you done for me Your magical touches fade off my sadness And chased away my fear with your presence The unconditional love that beyond from you I travel alone throughout the path of the life Your smile gets heart light in the darkness Like a beautiful star in the sky I never believed The happiness in your views helps my day pass by I know the love is fools dream and a sing to the poets Then the time being this fire retreats in its origin I am so fond of you that I cannot exist without your appearance Like without salt of tears happiness will not be sweeter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/21/2019 2:57:00 PM
I understand the plight and urgency. A thought provoking, prayer? I appreciated all of the insight! Nicely done!
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:44:00 PM
What a wonderful write on all the happenings of that day, brimming with possibilities! It was very positive and I could feel everything you described. I imagined it all as I went, and it turned out to be a pretty good day in February too! Lol! Loved it
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Date: 2/21/2019 2:19:00 PM
Such passion....pleading for this love.......you can't exist without. That is the kind of passion we should all experience. I felt your impatience as you begged for acknowledgement. Beautifully descriptive too!
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