Admiration

Permit me to shower my love to you
You conquered my world like an angel
No I have found what I am looking for
It’s you and your guidance nothing more
You offer me the best always
May you don’t know what you done for me
Your magical touches fade off my sadness
And chased away my fear with your presence
The unconditional love that beyond from you
I travel alone throughout the path of the life
Your smile gets heart light in the darkness
Like a beautiful star in the sky I never believed
The happiness in your views helps my day pass by
I know the love is fools dream and a sing to the poets
Then the time being this fire retreats in its origin
I am so fond of you that I cannot exist without your appearance
Like without salt of tears happiness will not be sweeter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kucharek Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 2:57 PM
I understand the plight and urgency. A thought provoking, prayer? I appreciated all of the insight! Nicely done!
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February 21, 2019 at 2:44 PM
What a wonderful write on all the happenings of that day, brimming with possibilities! It was very positive and I could feel everything you described. I imagined it all as I went, and it turned out to be a pretty good day in February too! Lol! Loved it
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February 21, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Such passion....pleading for this love.......you can't exist without. That is the kind of passion we should all experience. I felt your impatience as you begged for acknowledgement. Beautifully descriptive too!
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