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Into her eyes I enter, free of unctuous pretense, my daughter, so I can feel it all as she.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 4/19/2019 4:22:00 PM
Little ones feel and experience everything with the joy of newness. Somehow I have lost that, but I remember the thrill of discovery. Seeing the world through my childs eyes make me feel alive and frightened at the same time. Going to faves
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Date: 1/24/2019 10:21:00 AM
Love it! So sweet...
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Date: 1/12/2019 4:25:00 PM
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Date: 1/12/2019 2:47:00 PM
Laconic write filled with love and admiration for a sweetheart and an apple of the eye.. a pleasure to read. Blessings.
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:13:00 AM
Beautiful sentiment.
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:17:00 PM
This is brilliant David! I hope you had happy holidays and wish you blessings in this new year! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:39:00 PM
ohh, endearingly sweet for daddy's girl, david!... huggs
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Date: 1/11/2019 10:46:00 AM
Eyes are the window to the soul. This is beautiful, in so many amazing ways. :) I am smiling. ~ Brandy
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Date: 1/11/2019 7:31:00 AM
As seen through the innocent eyes of a two year old. Creative. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:50:00 AM
Almost too exquisite for words. No. Truly Too exquisite for words. No almost about it David.
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Date: 1/10/2019 11:54:00 PM
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David Byrne
Date: 1/11/2019 12:06:00 AM
no empathy, but interesting observation.