Admiration

Into her eyes I enter, free of unctuous pretense, my daughter, so I can feel it all as she.
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Jennings Avatar
April 19, 2019 at 4:22 PM
Little ones feel and experience everything with the joy of newness. Somehow I have lost that, but I remember the thrill of discovery. Seeing the world through my childs eyes make me feel alive and frightened at the same time. Going to faves
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Love it! So sweet...
One Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Nice...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Laconic write filled with love and admiration for a sweetheart and an apple of the eye.. a pleasure to read. Blessings.
Kiser Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Beautiful sentiment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:17 PM
This is brilliant David! I hope you had happy holidays and wish you blessings in this new year! : ) xxoo
Onclaud Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 2:39 PM
ohh, endearingly sweet for daddy's girl, david!... huggs
Nicole Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 10:46 AM
Eyes are the window to the soul. This is beautiful, in so many amazing ways. :) I am smiling. ~ Brandy
Callus Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 7:31 AM
As seen through the innocent eyes of a two year old. Creative. Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:50 AM
Almost too exquisite for words. No. Truly Too exquisite for words. No almost about it David.
Bangalee Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:54 PM
metempsychosis!
Byrne Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 12:06 AM
no empathy, but interesting observation.
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