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Admirable Woman

She pushes through
and no one has a clue,
why she works so hard.
Her feet are scarred
from wearing heels.
Behind her desk, she feels
successes were achieved;
kicking her heels off, relieved.

Tired and sore she sits
at home, not quite calling it quits.
She rarely refuses, and chooses
to slip into her running shoes.
For the day is still not over;
her children are looking over her shoulder.

In spite of  how she feels, aches, and ills,
feelings don't pay her bills.

She knew when and where 
to wear each pair.


8/2/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Schiavina Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:32 PM
wow, Eve, I LOVE how you did this. You truly made it about just two pairs of shoes. I am glad not to be her. I prefer my laid back job and life style!!!
Leach Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:31 PM
A wonderful write and a wonderful example to her children. Cood Luck in the contest.
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:58 PM
Thank you so very much, Alesia, and the good luck ~*
B. Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 6:33 PM
A woman's job is never finished. Such a true reality for so many. Great write. :)
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Thank you so very much, Victor, I know you will write a beautiful piece ~*
Warrior Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Ohh! those achy shoes...don't know how you women do it...high heels and all...yet you keep buying more shoes lol...great write Eve...^WW^
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so very much, ^WW^ , I could never wore heels, to wobbly ~*
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 7:36 PM
A great entry from you Eve! A single mother perhaps? They work the hardest! Best wishes for the contest! ; )
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:01 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie ~*
Vaso Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 7:28 PM
I think many a woman can relate to this, lovely poem Eve!
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Thank you so very much, Arthur ~*
May Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:18 PM
She must run another lap...Very nicely penned Eve
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Joseph, there at the end I had 3 jobs ~*
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:20 PM
soon, she'll have arthritis!... a different, splendid approach to the theme, eve... i enjoyed this.. huggs
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so very much, Nette ~*
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 1:53 PM
- Men should tried to go to work with high heels for seven hours, Eve - Lovely poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Thank you so very much, Sunshine, they should try doing at least part of what we do ~*
Gupta Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Very intelligent write ... Enjoyed the poem ... Good luck in the contest ...
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Thank you so very much, Probir ~*
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 11:54 AM
I think quite a few mothers can relate to your words Eve:-) I too entered the contest but am not sure what will float the sponsor's boat... we can but try:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan, I relate ~*
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Wonderful Eve. We do so much for those we love.
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 11:00 AM
thank you, Tim, I so happy to see you,,, We do everything we can for those we love, as you do for your love ones... Hugs dear friend
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