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Admirable Country of My Dreams

Deep in slumber, walked through the cave
Evolution of mankind I could witness & shape
Admirable Hovel and shacks build with pride
Transparent Barter culture with love revived

No race for money, power or greed anymore
Humane soul united like a monolith stone
Honesty again becomes the best policy
Love and care are the more valuable bounty

Live in admirable country with hearts clean
Dream to be among good and all serene
Progressive for all, by no serendipity
Wake up one day to witness this as reality


Dated: 21st February 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/4/2014 4:17:00 PM
Sneha, love the win...SKAT
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Date: 2/27/2014 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 2/27/2014 11:10:00 AM
You worked all of your words in speedily and then went on with a great poem Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/27/2014 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the write on the Dreams, sneha
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Date: 2/27/2014 3:30:00 AM
you did not use zareba which was optional means you lost a few points Sneha congrats on placing ty for entering hugs
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