Adios For Now

Chased the setting sun
To the cliffs of time
Adios my love
Goodbye

Transfigured
A metamorphosis
To jet black velvet sky

A trillion diamonds
Scattered
Fluttering there
Amid eternity

Dreams launched
Into infinity
Pending in wait
Till we meet again  



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on April 11, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK 9 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 2ND
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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Wow Line, This is incredibly beautiful! Congratulations on your high placement. I hope you’re having a wonderful Easter. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
April 12, 2020 at 9:38 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Cholt Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Beautiful, sad, poignant poem. Finishing with hope.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Thank you, WA, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Love your images, my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 6:23 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Achilles Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 5:22 AM
images came to mind with these words- great work Line, Regards, Julie
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comments, Julie.
Somadas Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 9:28 PM
Beautifully penned.. Sad emotions wrapped in fantastic imagery..
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 9:34 PM
Thank you, Jenish. Much appreciated.
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