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Adios For Now

Chased the setting sun To the cliffs of time Adios my love Goodbye Transfigured A metamorphosis To jet black velvet sky A trillion diamonds Scattered Fluttering like wings Amid eternity Dreams launched Into infinity Pending in wait Till we meet again AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on April 11, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK 9 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND Originally posted on February 9, 2020

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Date: 4/12/2020 6:40:00 PM
Wow Line, This is incredibly beautiful! Congratulations on your high placement. I hope you’re having a wonderful Easter. Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2020 9:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2020 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful, sad, poignant poem. Finishing with hope.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you, WA, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 2/10/2020 12:08:00 PM
Love your images, my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2020 5:22:00 AM
images came to mind with these words- great work Line, Regards, Julie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/10/2020 9:12:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comments, Julie.
Date: 2/9/2020 9:28:00 PM
Beautifully penned.. Sad emotions wrapped in fantastic imagery..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/9/2020 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Jenish. Much appreciated.

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