Adieu My Mortal Coil

Velvet winter’s bitter kiss
Escorts my soul to unholy Bliss
As teeth impale, my neck compelled
To embrace his unsacred gift

I am filled with blasphemed pain
As I am born anew
In damned unrest I will remain
A` vie je de adieu


*Hello everybody I just wanted to introduce myself, 
I'm Ricky, Chan's (aka JustThatArchaicPoet) husband. 
He's been encouraging me to join this community and 
share my art so I finally decided to share my work here.
I've never shared my work so I'm interested and nervous
about sharing it but I'm looking forward to the experience 
of putting myself out there for the first time. Thank You.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 27, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Ricky Another deep and powerful write. Your soul comes out in each one of your poems. No need to be nervous sharing your work. We are all friendly here and one big happy poet family. Nicely done Hugs Sweet Pea
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January 27, 2014 at 9:08 PM
I love you baby and I am proud of you <3
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