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Address To a Puck

Fair Eh your honest, hockey place, Great Chieftain of the scarring face! Between the boards with skates to lace, Your rubber froze, And darting dangerous quick of pace, In slap shots rose. The crackling ice on which you slide, Chased by padded boys well applied, In loss or victory you decide, Yours not to let; Where shots be accurate or wide Streak toward the net. This disc hits corners left and right Can cut you up with ready slight, From in behind burns the goal light, Whoa, bulging twine! This, the lonely goal tender’s plight, Guards the thin red line. Quick hands and fast of foot to flop, Who are said to be o’er the top, On grenades hurled they’re known to drop, And fallen beneath; With bodies bruised, brave lads will stop, And trade precious teeth! Your powers make cold winter fair, In boyhood dreams young and old share; With pride our true colours to wear, On Habs or Leafs stuck; This, O Canada’s common prayer, Blessed be a puck!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/15/2016 1:52:00 PM
Great poem! Really enjoyed it! Congrats on having it featured.
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Date: 2/12/2016 11:44:00 PM
DAVID, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:31:00 PM
- Welcome as a new member at P-Soup - A great first poem from you :) - I wish you good luck and a lot of new "poet" friends, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2015 5:28:00 PM
Hi David, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/10/2015 1:17:00 PM
David, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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