Addiction

Some people are addicted to computer games Used to be addicted but now sanity reigns Easy to get hooked Brain's overbooked Must be strong and break those old chains

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/28/2017 8:54:00 AM

Some are addicted to the news//Me, I'm addicted to snooze//A nap a day//Keeps blues away//Maybe two if I go on a cruise. BOOK ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 9:11:00 AM

"addicted to a snooze!" You too? My favourite pastime! Never been on a cruise... must try it before I write my last chapter! :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/28/2017 7:33:00 AM

Word up! Good morning Jack :) xomo!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 7:44:00 AM

My dear wifey-poo is one of those! HAVE A SUPER DOOPY DING DONG DAY, Miss Mo!!! Lovey hugs, Jacko xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/28/2017 7:19:00 AM

So true my friend! You can get addicted to those computer games, I know, I was addicted to WOW (World of Warcraft) for a time years ago (about 8 years ago)! What a wonderful write about this Jack! You have delighted me with this entertaining little limerick! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/28/2017 7:26:00 AM

Good good morning Russell! So you know of what I speak! My wife Cathie is in that category, unfortunately! Seems like no hope!!! LOL Happy to hear you got out from under! Cheers, Jack