Addicted

Addicted to The Green Stuff Addicted to The Wine You All know what I'm talking about It takes up all your time You got to get it when you can Even when it's offered Can't say no That would be awkward Every Chance to let your mind Free I say YES because it relaxes me Got to make that money I'm going to sip some Wine Once these two things connect everything else will turn out fine.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/15/2010 12:25:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today... hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members on site.. good luck with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2010 6:05:00 AM

Very interesting thoughts on addiction. I think human mind can be addicted to any thing in the world, intoxicating is a state of mind, Jessica

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2010 5:05:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jessica. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol