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Screaming, ranting, raving When the world didn't do it your way, Your anger so violent I feared for your heart; A blood vessel, like a fuse That's all it takes Blown and you 're out Forever. You threatened so often That it would make us happy If you died. No! No! No! That's not the way It's supposed to be. We love you then and now. We wanted for you The help you so desperately needed And we couldn't give Or get for you. You have to ask for yourself. Yet, you would not, could not ask; It would not be manly To show such 'weakness". Now, we say, If only, if only, If only, what?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/23/2013 4:29:00 AM
Thank you very much robin!
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Date: 9/22/2013 6:29:00 PM
words of darkness, despair, hopelessness and depth, the feelings you are writing about come through very clearly nice job
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:48:00 AM
Great feeling behind this poem, very emotional write.
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Date: 9/3/2011 7:00:00 AM
The agony and regret wring out so well. Well writ.
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