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You said you loved my company
Listing my humor as the reason why
I have not heard much of you lately
But those who laugh do not quickly die.
I was thinking about you today
When I told a friend a thing profound:
"Jokes are the salt of our reality" say
The more I laugh the more my pains abound.

I hide so much, and you are not here 
To listen, seismic quakings from below
The subterranean ego of my fear.
Ancient depths from Eve's quest to know
Remnant shards of ancestral guilt
Against the spine of life becoming
From seed's spring to orchard wilt
And lost joys for golden fleece discerning.

Give me youth again and the clean swept dirt
That frames the yard, the long log full
With friends' and cousins' eyes on our flirt
O the shams our innocence could pull
Desire meaningless like all our stories then
It is not so now when love's lessons write
Belated meanings on the heart of men
Not so while I think of you tonight  

What bright days were those when we glee
At subtle tellings of the truth, what joy
Embarked in woven dreams desires set free
The boy excited that the girl is coy
And all the lands pastoral, fecund with sweat
From our brows, was a bright memorial
To things old men should forget, O forget
The jokes were truth that fear made trivial.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nutter Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 3:17 PM
This was simply excellent. I do not have the words to how good this write is. The metaphors throughout this poem does not diminish or confuse the reader, they serve to hold the readers attention and make it more enjoyable.
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Wow David, I love the ending of your write.. Reminded me of something I sometimes do. Hope you are enjoying your day :) Wilma
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September 1, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Oh psychology in the last lines...well played. Well written my friend...I have trouble writing longer poems...just can't come up with so many words. I have been working on a short story and only have a half page....maybe I will get it! LOL
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