Adam's Garden-W

Adam’s garden                                            

“Won’t you come in my garden? 
The spring being near
It needs to be fertilized 
And to get greener.” 

I would like my roses to see you.
“Won’t you come in the recesses of
My heart, it wants to feel throbbing?”.

“Won’t you come in my mind?
It wishes to feel intellectual touch”.

“Won’t you come in my dreams?”
They wish to confront reality.

It is a place to remember love,
To be lonely for a while,
It is the kingdom of man,
“Won’t you come in my garden”?

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Sixth Placement
For contest : Adam in Eden
I dedicate this poem to Linda-marie Bariana
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Lacey Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 4:09 PM
great desciption of human nature!
Cwiak Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 12:48 AM
Nice write and dedication! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Many congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
Kelly Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 11:01 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest and very well done .
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 4:44 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Segal Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Great poem for contest! good luck! thank you for your comment, love Simone
A  Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 6:34 PM
LOVELY DR. RAM, LINDA IS A LUCKY EVE. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 10:04 PM
I really like yours. I think it was one of the most inviting I read yet! LUv, andrea
Milgate Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Enjoy always the invitation to think that your poetry offers.
Mehta Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:50 PM
Yes, it is for Linda's contest
Guzzi Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Dear Friend if this is for OUR contest let me know cause Linda's COMP is broke!
Knop Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Well written, Dr. Ram, wish you also good luck in the contest and thank you for your comments...Gert
Ahmad Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Dr. Ram, I enjoyed reading this verse!
Diva Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 7:10 PM
I appreciate your nice comment Dr. Mehta and see you have also entered the contest as I have done .. my best wishes for your success. Satin Doll Diva
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