Adam's Easter

Adam’s Easter



I fell today,
an unexpected plunge.  A once inviting pleasure now
gave birth to anguish clouding the eyes of my soul,
snatching the innocence that lay within.
Forced to the ground like ancient serpent
who chose its own deception I found no dwelling for honor and code,
or joyful communion.
Only me. Now alone.

I wept in pain,
a shuddering lament.  Not sure of its genesis
I came to understand bewilderment born in my spirit that now embodied
innocence and guilt, obedience and shame.
I felt punctured and torn apart like
one thrust from the heavens doomed to time,
forced to drink of the absence of eternity that 
I chose.  Bitter herbs.

A herald sounded today,
a heavenly blast.  I sensed it profoundly within
as it rose from a forgotten image, an unseen
power summoning life, heralding hope.
They say my descendant was put to death
pierced on a cross, head crowned with thorns as
the wind blew briskly over the emptiness of the earth and the
veil that separated God from man was torn in two.
I ponder.  I wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ackerson Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Wonderful wordage - "like ancient serpent who chose its own deception" and powerful conveyance. Thank you.
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April 4, 2015 at 8:44 PM
RALPH, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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March 31, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Ralph, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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March 31, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Welcome to the site! This was very well laid our. I like how you weave elements from the Crucifixion into Adam's thoughts. It gives lots of food for thought. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Jan
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