Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

Adam of Love and Faith

Adam of Love
barely knew what to put 
in black and white
with the Light in his heart
the dark able to look through.
A man of wealth
warmth and tenderness
the precious kernels of his soul.
A smile grew from his ribs
revealing inner rarity and creed.
Nature, his ancestors and his
in nature my Adam
so loving, so caring, so sweet.
Adam of Faith
in his prayers, Allah he never failed
imbued with a stainless strong belief.
Words of God dwell in his feelings
many a time overflowed into tears
reaching out for his deeds.
Adam of my heart
ever my words would me betray
to draw and paint your portrait
magic colours yet didn’t find their way
to meet your beauty
Dad, apple of my soul.

October 2nd, 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos November 18, 2018 at 3:08 AM Hi Besma, Your opulent and revered way that your write of both Adam and your Father displays a depth of faith not all can reach. I majored in Religious studies and in my honours year, my thesis was on the spirituality of the Holy Book. You are an amazing woman, teacher, poetess and poetry friend all wrapped into one! Be blessed Besma! xoxo, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri November 20, 2018 at 10:01 AM Thank you so much, won't meet the beautiful and heartfelt words spilled on my humble soul and write.. none of my words will suffice to render my gratitude and recognition for your remarkable Beauty and humbleness.. I'm honoured and blessed to have you dear Jennifer on my paths of life and poetry.. love and hugs.

Faraz Ajmal November 5, 2018 at 11:17 AM Ahh such a lovely poem this is, truly a masterpiece and a fav for me, your this poem has direcly touch my heart and it sure was a pleasure to read, how sad it is that despite being evolve from the common ancestor, how much separate we all are now a days, same human beings, all made up of dust, yet there is so much hatred in the world, good luck and have a really nice day Besma Riabi Dziri November 6, 2018 at 5:43 AM What a beautiful and profound feedback Faraz! Indeed, Faith and Love are the epitome of Humanity Beauty! May we all strive to reach inner peace and grace! Countless are the blessings granted by God! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and insightful feedback. My pleasure and honour. Be blessed always.

Paul Callus October 7, 2018 at 1:07 PM A most beautiful tribute poem which touches our heart and soul, Besma. From Adam's rib a woman came to life...a father also contributes to the birth of a child, in this case the poetess who praises the attributes of this special person. ~ Warm regards, dear friend. // paul Besma Riabi Dziri October 7, 2018 at 3:42 PM I venerate every Adam of Beauty, Love and Faith whose seeds grow into beauty that will make a difference in the world of Humanity.. Thank you so much Paul for feeling my humble words.. Your generous feedback is valuable and rewarding. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 5, 2018 at 4:27 AM What a tribute! What a poetic explosion! What beauty of a language! Bless you dearest Besma! Besma Riabi Dziri October 5, 2018 at 6:45 AM What a rewarding and honouring feedback dear Demetrios! It is thanks to such a heartfelt and encouraging feedback that I walk on the path of poetry with steady and growing beauty! Thank you so much dear Demetrios for your gracious presence and for your constant genuine support and encouragement. My warmest regards. Be blessed always.

Mohamad Safan October 3, 2018 at 4:55 PM god may help and get you advanced Besma Riabi Dziri October 5, 2018 at 6:18 AM Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Honoured and humbled. Be blessed.

Susan Ashley October 3, 2018 at 3:37 PM My dearest friend, Besma, your beautiful verses elevate Adam of Love to beyond Heaven as only your golden glow of poetic enlightenment and enchantment can do. Your exquisite tribute to Adam of Faith is deep, meaningful and inspired and your moving, heartfelt and loving dedication to Dad, apple of your soul, brings my heart to a culmination of joyful tears as I can feel your love, appreciation and admiration for him throughout the breathtaking imagery of your awe-inspiring poem. A gorgeous fav my lovely friend! Warmest wishes, love and hugs always and it’s a pleasure for your ardent reader to absorb your supreme poetry.. ~Susan Besma Riabi Dziri October 5, 2018 at 6:16 AM None of my words will render my deepest gratitude to you dear Susan for being here with your sincere compassion, beauty and rewarding feedback. My warmest regards and wishes. Love and hugs. Blessed be always. Besma Riabi Dziri October 5, 2018 at 6:15 AM As I read your generous feedback dear Susan, my heart is filled with a great a joy to tears! Sharing the same tune of the heart towards a loving and loveable Adam! To grow from the ribs of Love, Faith and Beauty is the utmost grace and blessings from God! A soul worthy of veneration! Always with an aching joy and a lump in the heart I'll keep my dad alive in my humble work..

Winged Warrior October 3, 2018 at 12:40 PM Besma, my friend...your words are scribed with a Divine presence...reaching our spirits here on Earth...heavenly my friend...love & light...^WW^ Besma Riabi Dziri October 5, 2018 at 5:58 AM Winged warrior, your honourable presence on my page.. your heartfelt, encouraging and praising feedbacks reach the depth of my soul and enrich the voice of my poetry.. I tremendously thank you, may your wings never cease to soar to the highest beauty of Love, Light and Poetry. Best regards.

Freddie Robinson Jr. October 2, 2018 at 7:10 PM Beautiful and deeply spiritually poem, Lady Besma! You sure can word weave on a fifth dimension level. You MAKE us think. Us free-thinkers are weaned on Mother's milk poetry such as this. Truly inside gorgeous poem. Love and more love always. Besma Riabi Dziri October 3, 2018 at 5:03 AM To have my "Adam of Love and Faith" reach my readers souls and touch their hearts is my utmost honour and joy! It is but with such an encouraging and generous feedback that a poet can raise higher the voice of poetry.. deeply humbled by your comment Freddie, thank you so much. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Tom Cunningham October 2, 2018 at 5:18 PM A beautiful verse and dedication Besma. So well written. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri October 3, 2018 at 4:35 AM I'm very delighted to have you on my page Tom telling me that my humble work is worthy to be read and appreciated. Thank you so much for the honour and delight. Best regards. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit October 2, 2018 at 4:29 PM A heartfelt prayer in honor of Adam of love, faith, and heart. Your depiction feels spiritual and peaceful..loving and caring. Especially the tribute in the end to Dad is touching, but so is the entire poem. Feelings well portrayed, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri October 3, 2018 at 4:07 AM I'm thrilled to have my words resonated with the depth of your beautiful soul and heart. I do treasure your constant support and uplifting feedbacks dear Vijay.. Thank you so much for the honour and the reward.. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.