Adam and Eve's 'Little Snack'

      An apple a day keeps the doctor away
         A half-eaten worm brings him back

      If he can’t fix the problem in less than a day
         Think of poor Adam and Eve ~ and cut Doc some slack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:03 PM
Fun read and wit to spare. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. BB
Godwin Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:28 AM
You are on a roll, for me a backwards roll due to the order I'm reading in. Again, beyond clever and medicinal for those who crave laughter and lightheartedness. Love, CayCay
Wolf Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:43 PM
You are too, too kind, CayCay. Thank you for all of your encouragement. Poetry hugs, Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 4:12 AM
hilarious and witty....won't quite think of Adam and Eve the same ever again :-)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace