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Adam and Eve's 'Little Snack'

An apple a day keeps the doctor away A half-eaten worm brings him back If he can’t fix the problem in less than a day Think of poor Adam and Eve ~ and cut Doc some slack

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Date: 7/28/2025 10:03:00 PM
Fun read and wit to spare. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. BB
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Date: 7/28/2025 10:28:00 AM
You are on a roll, for me a backwards roll due to the order I'm reading in. Again, beyond clever and medicinal for those who crave laughter and lightheartedness. Love, CayCay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/28/2025 5:43:00 PM
You are too, too kind, CayCay. Thank you for all of your encouragement. Poetry hugs, Gershon
Date: 7/28/2025 4:12:00 AM
hilarious and witty....won't quite think of Adam and Eve the same ever again :-)
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