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Adam and Eve

NO NEED FOR BLUSH Eve sans blush in her cheeks, in her most ancient of days. matrimonial bouquet, nude. God simply gave Eve to Adam in her beautiful birthday suit. 10/23/2017

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Date: 10/24/2017 7:57:00 PM
I could just picture them in their lush garden home before the eviction! Great free verse Kim!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 8:19:00 PM
Hanks, Che! :)
Date: 10/24/2017 1:30:00 PM
Ah...those were the days, Kim, when life was much simpler!! A very enjoyable presentation...a return to Eden! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 1:46:00 PM
Yes, today it is all the rush of emotions, far far from Eden! Oh what we shall know one day! Thanks, Paul <3
Date: 10/24/2017 6:18:00 AM
This is really sweet.. nice last couple of lines..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thanks, Silent!
Date: 10/23/2017 9:53:00 PM
So cute, loved this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thanks, Arthur :)

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