Adam and Eve

NO NEED FOR BLUSH

Eve sans blush in her cheeks,
in her most ancient of days.
matrimonial bouquet, nude.

God simply gave Eve to Adam
in her beautiful birthday suit.

10/23/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hoffman Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 7:57 PM
I could just picture them in their lush garden home before the eviction! Great free verse Kim!~Che :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Hanks, Che! :)
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 1:30 PM
Ah...those were the days, Kim, when life was much simpler!! A very enjoyable presentation...a return to Eden! Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Yes, today it is all the rush of emotions, far far from Eden! Oh what we shall know one day! Thanks, Paul <3
One Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 6:18 AM
This is really sweet.. nice last couple of lines..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Thanks, Silent!
Vaso Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 9:53 PM
So cute, loved this!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Thanks, Arthur :)
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