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Adam, I haven't a care in the world eating apples or drinking, so absurd The devil it seems, was his best mate I laughed when they kicked his butt out the gate Its Eve that makes me stay up at night Her kindness, always, like a bright light Worry I do that she is well and ok All of humanity has a stake in Eves day Forever quiet, never one for attention Yet when angels sang she was there for redemption She has transcended time and lore till now I know, for she is the sweetest frau Her paintings lift up any sad heart Musings written, all a la carte! She is one of the greats in the arts Softly with sweetness, knowledge imparts She never gave Adam a second thought For her, ol sonny was all a heart ever sought Now Cain and Abel had another brother yet they hated the other, to each they would smother The other brother is not found in the books he was too busy writing poetry, down by the brook The moral of this story is any and none I just wanted Eve, to smile some!

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Date: 9/27/2018 12:20:00 PM
Great rendition of the Adam & Eve clan...we all have our eves to worry about...like my eavesdrop lol...^WW^
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Date: 9/27/2018 8:49:00 AM
Giggles, I'm sure it would work. xomo
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Date: 9/27/2018 5:50:00 AM
I can but highly value and venerate Adam for feeling and showing such esteem and reverence for Eve! How beautiful and elegant are your words! How honouring are your thoughts Arthur! A standing ovation for your excellent work of art and heart! Indeed, Eve can but smile and rejoice. A cherished FAV. My deepest regards. Stay blessed always.
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Date: 9/26/2018 11:43:00 PM
I love the write, Arthur, it is very beautiful ... a smile and a tear :') hugs dear friend ....It's funny my captcha is ask... " Ask and you shall receive" a fav.
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Date: 9/26/2018 10:37:00 PM
I wonder if Adam was the first cider drinker? Nice write, Art
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