Notes About The Poem

Written, October 2, 2023
For The Contest, “ABCD Clerihew” - 4 Lines
Sponsor, Joseph May

Adam

God's rule- Adam chose not to grapple when Eve made him bite that Red Apple; doubted life outside Eden would suck! Well, it did! Now we all remain stuck!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:17 PM
a fun poem Sandra I especially love the final 2 lines! hugs Jan xx
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October 15, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your first-place win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
May Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:07 PM
It sure did, Very nicely penned Sandra, Congrats on your win
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