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Adam

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Written, October 2, 2023
For The Contest, “ABCD Clerihew” - 4 Lines
Sponsor, Joseph May

God's rule- Adam chose not to grapple when Eve made him bite that Red Apple; doubted life outside Eden would suck! Well, it did! Now we all remain stuck!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Jan Allison
Date: 10/15/2023 5:17:00 PM
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a fun poem Sandra I especially love the final 2 lines! hugs Jan xx
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Alexis Y.
Date: 10/15/2023 4:51:00 PM
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Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your first-place win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2023 2:07:00 PM
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It sure did, Very nicely penned Sandra, Congrats on your win
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