Adam

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Written, October 2, 2023
For The Contest, “ABCD Clerihew” - 4 Lines
Sponsor, Joseph May


God's rule- Adam chose not to grapple

when Eve made him bite that Red Apple;

doubted life outside Eden would suck!

Well, it did! Now we all remain stuck!

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