Actually Love

I sit broken hearted,
My mind hasn't started
I'm lost in the darkness
Broken hearted is,
The loss of feeling in your bones
Your home doesn't feel like home,
You're falling apart
As is your heart.
The bed doesn't feel so warm
You are apart of the torn,
The sad, the angry, the mad
Loss of what you had,
Quiet as mice
With eyes as cold as ice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 10, 2017 at 12:18 PM
All this pain, so well worded in this powerful, yet sad poem... "quiet as mice // With eyes cold as ice." That is SO painful, yet so good poetry the same time.
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March 8, 2017 at 11:17 PM
I can feel the emotion in these words, nice poem.
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