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Actually Love

I sit broken hearted, My mind hasn't started I'm lost in the darkness Broken hearted is, The loss of feeling in your bones Your home doesn't feel like home, You're falling apart As is your heart. The bed doesn't feel so warm You are apart of the torn, The sad, the angry, the mad Loss of what you had, Quiet as mice With eyes as cold as ice.

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Date: 3/10/2017 12:18:00 PM
All this pain, so well worded in this powerful, yet sad poem... "quiet as mice // With eyes cold as ice." That is SO painful, yet so good poetry the same time.
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Date: 3/8/2017 11:17:00 PM
I can feel the emotion in these words, nice poem.
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