Activeness of the Old Age

Old man or woman wants to do something
cause still alive he/she is on edge afar
Old man or woman wants to do something
cause wants not to live as burden on others




-November 14, 2018 Chattogram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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November 14, 2018 at 2:46 PM
So true… I can relate especially to the last two lines: In their old age, neither of my parents wanted to burden my siblings or me...And I feel the same way toward my children, as I age...And yes, we WANT to do something!! Well-spoken, Mahtab! Best wishes, Gershon
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