Beata Agustin Poet Haiku

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fiery* smoke clouds sky

lethal ash cements green leaves

volcano erupts

*Psalm 21:9 You will place them in a fiery furnace at the time of Your appearing. In His wrath the LORD will engulf them, and the fire will consume them.

February 1, 2020
1st place, "Strict Haiku" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by William Kekaula; judged on 2/1/2020.

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Connie Marcum Wong February 4, 2020 at 12:26 AM Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Beata. xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen February 2, 2020 at 12:40 PM - Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2020 at 9:02 AM Way to go in the contest. Congrats on a wonderful win

Peter W Iversen February 2, 2020 at 7:07 AM Perfect imagery, congrats-Peter

Tom Cunningham February 1, 2020 at 11:39 PM A reminder that our world is a living thing Beata, perfect image, congrats Tom

Jenish Somadas February 1, 2020 at 9:29 PM Active mount at work...An alarm for those near.. A poetic expression for those far..Congrats on your fantastic win Beata..