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He’s in a bunker in his Head; outside the World is all but dead Protect the cause at Any cost; he holds his Nerve, resolve embossed What will happen when It’s done? This deed that’s Good for everyone! Sweat is pouring down His chest; beneath the Semtex that’s been Blessed. Dazed with Joy of things to come; A greater world has just Begun! “God be Praised, he pressed His thumb and boom The blast took Everyone”.

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Date: 4/11/2010 7:05:00 PM
This just flowed with suspense, you are quite the storyteller, well done, and that ending!!!.. love constance
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:09:00 AM
Ow my,terrifying experience,it gave me goose pimples,a sad reality,I love the white flag spelling peace.great poem Dear David. .Charma
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Date: 4/10/2010 11:37:00 AM
Oh, my God! The most frightening thing! And you wrote it so well, David. Very chilling! Thanks for sharing and for your comments on mine. You have soupmail. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/10/2010 4:30:00 AM
Great write that drew me in and held me ...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:32:00 PM
You are so good David. A clever metaphor with a classic ending! I loved it! This is going into my favorites file. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:08:00 PM
VERY powerful write. they truly think it is the right thing, making it so scary for us all. Exellent writing. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:55:00 PM
ENJOYED VERY MUCH . THANK YOU
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:36:00 PM
I enjoyed and felt your action. nice write
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