Action

Your laxity will encourage the pirate
     Do not go in slumber, act, act, act

Crying over your destiny will not help
               If this doesn’t work, do that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 9, 2009 at 9:33 AM
So much truth in your words. Laxity allows the lion to take over the den. This is a timeless message. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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December 7, 2009 at 8:54 AM
Great poem, I wrote a poem called Destiny, love Simone
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