Poet Destroyer A Poet Rhyme

Acting Out

.            Acting Out

Standing, lying, falling, crawling, I keep trying, crying, lying, rhyming, love is blinding
I play, obey, eat, -I digest, caress the softness, when I'm blinking, I'm found sinking 
I find myself thinking, walking, talking, mocking, craving, misbehaving, and dreaming
Shake, break, my heart can't take, I smile, in style, small thoughts, are all I got
I'm lazy, hazy, I get crazy, I shout, when in doubt, Acting Out, that's what I'm all about

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Reason A. Poteet April 22, 2014 at 10:17 PM What a characterization of acting out...a drama queen for sure. Congratulations on your win, well-deserved. The many emotional talents of an artist of the stage and screen.

Connie Marcum Wong April 21, 2014 at 5:32 AM Congratulations on your Big win in this contest PD. I loved your last line. Great rhyming.

Casarah Nance April 20, 2014 at 7:16 AM awesome. well put and well placed in the contest. grats on this work ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 19, 2014 at 3:26 AM hahahah,, i love this rhymes.. :D i can just imagine how it is.. :D hahahahahha i love it really.. :) CONGRATULATIONS LINDA, love lots.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 19, 2014 at 1:27 AM Wow Linda ! unimaginable,,, great poetry,,, congrats on great win !

Verlena S. Walker April 18, 2014 at 7:32 PM Nice win PD-Linda... Congratulations.... Verlena

Debbie Guzzi April 18, 2014 at 7:28 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May April 18, 2014 at 6:34 PM Congrats on your win Linda...nicely done

Tim Smith April 18, 2014 at 5:37 PM I like what you are all about Linda...I have a challenge for you....starting today for the next month write down one word describing your day. I will do the same..Make poems out of the words...lol Congratulations on your awesome poem and fine win......hugs Tim

Paul Callus April 18, 2014 at 3:34 PM Very amusing...left me breathless :) Congrats on fine win. // paul

Aiyah Torres April 18, 2014 at 3:30 PM you PD.. how can you create this kind of poetry... I'm envy!! ..:O)) Wish I could be in your body one day ,so that I can't just be somebody... I don't wanna be nobody.. so here I am ..Sending you a smile.. COngratulations, Lady in Rhyme!!! ..:O))

Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2014 at 3:27 PM LOL, Thank you Julie, this is one of floopy poems. Glad you hosted this contest.... Thank you for the win... PD

Richard D Seal June 25, 2013 at 7:51 PM Just passing by to say hello my Sweet Dark Friend, seems we both got nothing new on but least you have plenty in reserve for me, Take care, Richard

David Scott July 27, 2012 at 3:03 PM wicked like the word combination i tryed with stumbling mumbaling I fall crumbaling tumbaling being a fool ilike trhis a lot so much to choose from x david scott

Elizabeth Wesley May 30, 2012 at 6:29 PM Great assortment of words to bring the message PD. Hope it comes to a satisfactory conclusion without too much hassle. P S Why is bl wishing you Merry Christmas? Am I missing something here?

Bl Devnath December 24, 2011 at 6:12 AM I always miss, I am blessed. Wonderful cultivation of inner mine of thoughts. Thanks. Wish you Happy Merry Christmas day and sweet happy New Year. bl

Michael J. Falotico February 5, 2011 at 11:13 AM ARE A ~CONTINUE~

Jezabella Singe September 18, 2010 at 8:21 PM hi its jez! you commented on my poem and yours is great!!!!

Doris Culverhouse August 12, 2010 at 7:47 AM hey pd how are you?? thanks for your support and recognizing my poem in your contest!! It makes me keep trying.

Michael Gelb July 2, 2010 at 3:29 PM Very good I liked your poem. I only started writing poems since my wife died in 2009 I can relate to rhyming poems better than others. As you can tell from my poems. A lot of poems I don’t understand and I would hate to give a wrong comment. I want my poems to honor my wife long after I’m gone. Thank you I had to go to the dictionary for the word "couplets"

Sara Kendrick June 18, 2010 at 10:58 AM Interesting couplets that you have penned in this one..A good mixture of the good, the bad, and the ugly...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for faithfully stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Matthew Pawlak June 17, 2010 at 6:56 PM Cool poem =) i like the realizm in this. Thank you for your comments on my poem - Matt

Andrea Dietrich June 15, 2010 at 9:31 PM I think that last couplet says it all, P.D. and I enjoyed reading ALL of this cool rhyming poem of yours. Great rhythm! HOpe you are ok these days. Haven't heard from ya in a little while. Let me check out yuour last post! Luv,Andrea

Phil Boy June 15, 2010 at 8:25 PM crazy does B.boy

Lynette Chachere June 15, 2010 at 6:35 PM loll.i found this funny. a very amusing rhyme.hahahaa. hey, sorry i havn't been on for long anymore.i've been in summer school. and i have forced myself to study a lot. i barely study anything, and its a really bad habit,so i need to start now. so like i had fun while doing so today,in a group at my summer class. we had a good laugh, we were all doing so well, until the sounds of this girl in the hallway sneezing non-stop, but it sounded more like moans and banging of a wall.ahh,good stuff

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