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A breeze that day Curling the hair Refused to move away Ofra gave it a chair She loved the whisper Tendrils of fingers Inclined to kiss her Curious neck lingers Lilacs of loneliness Intimacy is obvious Filling the emptiness The tweets are lascivious August 14, 2018

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Date: 8/16/2018 8:18:00 PM
The breeze is a little intimidating .. love the verse, Probir..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/17/2018 7:15:00 PM
That is best known to the breeze and ofra! ... Thank you ...
Date: 8/15/2018 2:30:00 PM
That breeze is definitely female Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/17/2018 7:16:00 PM
That is a subject of interesting research ! ... Thanks, Jean ...
Date: 8/15/2018 4:33:00 AM
A sensual delight my friend!!
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Date: 8/14/2018 4:22:00 AM
Very good, Probir. Love the personification of the breeze. // Barry
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/17/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Barry ....

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