Across the Void

a man and a woman
lucky in love and precious
fate walked in and kissed them both
kisses wet, sloppy, thirsty
from an unplanned tenderness
romance fluttered
love came next there was no doubt
their chemistry delicious
played one off the others substantial
in the beginning of her purring
on purpose as fate
walked them down the primrose blushing
passion concentrated and gifted
translovely dream cooing
across the abyss
separating them from their naughty
they talked of love needful
secrets were confessed fragile
vowed to leave the past behind
shredded and troubled
their bond will be sewn husky
he closes his eye tender
she holds out her attractive
together they are damaged
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/7/2014 11:54:00 AM
This rocks, great write, another fav for me?
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Date: 12/7/2014 9:27:00 AM
Are we ever more damaged in such a beautiful way? I like the way you think.
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:17:00 AM
Hi Race, I enjoyed reading this very deep powerful romantic piece! Excellent write! Pandita
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